Dispersing Agony

The tantrums are just the way we say,

For all things we’ve believed and prayed,

The seeds were sown all day in cheerful ray,

Alas! The outburst of anger has sailed and derailed.


Protests stand rooted while at heart,

Standing tall through withering hopelessness.

The authority has the audacity to question this art,

And reverse all said with acute thoughtlessness.


The graceful borders have sunk with the hit,

From the impact, the battle against tyranny is won.

The rulers are ousted with the mounted grit,

Raising the fortified borders in the ruthless sun.


Storms have come but with a rainbow of hope,

Bruising the legs but sparing the eye of the storm.

Events are churned to flattering heights to cope,

And brought down in time to their relaxed form.


The peace of the fortune is descending upon,

In the whirr of new machines; sparking a dawn,

Of all things bright, the leaf is turned thereupon,

And the amassed agony of years is arrested to spawn.


50 responses

  1. The peace of the fortune is descending upon,

    In the whirr of new machines; sparking a dawn,

    Of all things bright, the leaf is turned thereupon,

    And the amassed agony of years is arrested to spawn.

    love your expression here, thoughtful composition.
    Happy Rally.

    May 21, 2011 at 3:04 pm

  2. Its good, different, thoughtful and something that delivers a significant meaning.

    Good work!


    May 21, 2011 at 5:53 pm

    • Thanks Mihir, glad you absorbed its significance:)

      May 28, 2011 at 10:31 am

  3. last stanza is filled with positivity, hope, new beginning…nice πŸ™‚
    Enjoy the rally!

    May 21, 2011 at 10:51 pm

  4. so strong….

    May 22, 2011 at 2:13 pm

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  6. Miki

    Great poem. Loved the line “Raising the fortified borders in the ruthless sun.” You have a wonderful way of putting words together. I’ll definitely be back!


    May 23, 2011 at 6:49 pm

  7. Profound and beautifully expressed. Magnificent =)

    May 24, 2011 at 4:51 pm

  8. sounds like a victory to me!

    May 25, 2011 at 12:35 am

  9. love the turn toward hope in the end…and some wonderful quick rhymes throughout really drive this poem…well played…

    May 25, 2011 at 2:30 am

  10. Tis your name that brought me to your blog..but liked what you wrote.

    May 25, 2011 at 5:14 am

    • Thanks budhaaah,happy to know that you liked something more than my name:)

      June 8, 2011 at 3:44 pm

  11. Every storm comes tagged with a rainbow of hope:)Lovely composition Vishwas:)

    May 25, 2011 at 5:45 am

  12. That is agonizing
    I had to read over again and that is the word that comes from my lips.
    Your expression is elegant ( I know how does that work with agony and yet the words are magnificent)

    May 25, 2011 at 7:05 pm

    • Thanks Moondustwriter, glad you like it:) Haha,yes it was agonizing!

      June 8, 2011 at 3:46 pm

  13. Storms have come but with a rainbow of hope,
    very nice….

    May 26, 2011 at 12:41 am

  14. That’s a very poignant one, Vishwas.. and perfectly timed too!
    The rhymes seemed so effortless and natural here.. really liked this powerful piece!

    May 26, 2011 at 5:50 am

  15. kyogakura

    what astounds me the most is the rhyme scheme. i cant rhyme anymore o_o

    anyway, what i saw here is something like off the streets…something we call a mobilization.

    i liked it for the most part πŸ˜€

    May 28, 2011 at 3:45 am

  16. nothings stays put,

    changing whether is part of our emotions.
    lovely entry.


    May 30, 2011 at 8:52 pm

  17. There will always be storms but as we continue to hope, storms just help to wash away the grime and brighten for a new day.

    May 31, 2011 at 6:44 pm

  18. 1st stanza, how very true, my rants tend to be from lessons accepted in my youth. The rest flowed easy and the last stanza gave hope of forgiveness and future.

    June 1, 2011 at 1:22 am

  19. i like the positivity at the end.

    June 1, 2011 at 8:28 am

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  21. Yes we have to push on through all the crap
    Even if a break is needed for a nap
    As some hope has to remain
    Going forth in our life lane
    Very nice write here today
    Glad from one stop I came to stray

    June 1, 2011 at 6:30 pm

    • Thanks Pat,glad you like it. Liked your rhymes used here:)

      June 10, 2011 at 8:58 am

  22. I love how seamless and flowing you rhymed your poetry together. Amazing job, a very poignant and strong words.

    June 3, 2011 at 5:57 pm

  23. enjoyed it.. nice one buddy.. πŸ™‚

    June 4, 2011 at 8:23 am

  24. Sirjee .. this 1 is great …
    even I liked ur Blog as well ..
    especially the theme .. matches mine πŸ˜›
    I like the how the emotions flows throughout the poetry
    Here’s mine poetry work ..


    June 6, 2011 at 3:23 am

    • Thanks ashbeezone, glad you like this and my blog. Will drop by yours:)

      June 10, 2011 at 9:07 am

  25. I feel you are perhaps touching on the Arab Spring, and this is a beautiful poem πŸ™‚

    June 8, 2011 at 1:50 pm

    • Yes, partly that Leonargo. Glad you like it:)

      June 10, 2011 at 9:07 am

  26. A very graceful and well-worded piece. I particularly enjoyed the wording of second and third stanzas and the hopeful end. ~MsQ

    June 10, 2011 at 3:30 am

  27. Very well said. It leaves with a sense of proud weariness combined with hope.

    July 11, 2011 at 11:40 am

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