Sunlit Darkness
The moon is virtuously fettered,
With the veil of the sun’s luminosity,
Shadows of hope glitteringly litter,
Sunlit darkness sways.
Published in Four And Twenty(4 lines,20 words):Sunlit Darkness
Vishwas Anand
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“Shadows of hope glittering litter,” interesting analogy.
May 2, 2011 at 1:14 am
Thanks Valerie,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:16 am
smiles.
love your short verse.
stunning imagery.
A++
May 2, 2011 at 1:34 am
Thanks Jingle,for your appreciation:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:21 am
quite beautiful. thank you
May 2, 2011 at 1:56 am
Thanks lunawitch15,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:22 am
“sunlit darkness sways”, very visual indeed.
Thanks for sharing.
May 2, 2011 at 2:55 am
Glad you like it Andy,thanks:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:23 am
short but a flash of brilliance..
May 2, 2011 at 1:39 pm
Thanks Aashi,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:23 am
Astonishing vividness to the images you’ve given life, well done piece
May 3, 2011 at 12:40 am
Thanks A.B. Thomas,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:24 am
Very cool and creative …and the pic is a nice touch.
my potluck post is here
May 3, 2011 at 1:06 am
Thanks swanrose,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:25 am
Much to think about. Vivid imagery. Well written.
May 3, 2011 at 3:06 am
Thanks danroberson,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:26 am
brilliant!
May 3, 2011 at 3:44 am
Thanks tarunima,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:26 am
very nice imagery!!
May 4, 2011 at 12:24 am
Thanks Becca Givens,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:27 am
Lovely!
May 4, 2011 at 2:00 am
Thanks ayala,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:27 am
great poem but that last line is gorgeous…
May 4, 2011 at 2:44 am
Thanks brian,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:28 am
dichotomy at its best few words speak a lot in did !
May 4, 2011 at 8:46 am
Lovely!! Actually, “brilliant” imagery.. the moon, despite her borrowed light is such a beauty..isn’t she? Full of desire and a gentle sheen.. she is quite a marvel…
Loved the way you’ve captured such a deep thought in words here..
May 5, 2011 at 4:10 pm
Thanks Kavita,yes the moon is a marvel! Glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:29 am
perfect finish,
thanks for sharing…
May 6, 2011 at 2:46 am
Thanks Jingle:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:30 am
dude i love this! simply great!
May 6, 2011 at 10:24 am
Thanks Julian,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:31 am
Short, smart, brilliant.
May 6, 2011 at 2:09 pm
Thanks K. McGee,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:32 am
wondeful.”sunlit darkness” gets me daydreaming, thanks
May 6, 2011 at 11:19 pm
Nice imagery.
All blessings to you.
May 8, 2011 at 11:27 am
Thanks meiro,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:32 am
Nice one! Beautiful and thought-provoking 🙂
May 8, 2011 at 11:33 am
Thanks magher1,glad you like it:)
May 9, 2011 at 1:33 am
Happy Potluck!
amazing creativity,
thanks…
A++
May 9, 2011 at 1:51 am
Wow, the moon would be happy to read it if she could :-)Thanks for sharing.
May 9, 2011 at 3:04 am
Exquiste
May 9, 2011 at 11:07 am
Exquisite
May 9, 2011 at 11:07 am
Liked the poem very much.
The third like an optimist, extracting hope from the very narrow,
fourth line gasping for light even though the sun is still glowing.
*Beautiful*
May 9, 2011 at 5:09 pm
I like the image of the moon, fettered by the sun’s luminosity. Very nice.
May 9, 2011 at 7:44 pm
love that last line…
May 12, 2011 at 2:26 am
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May 12, 2011 at 12:25 pm
Hello,
Appreciate your participation at poets rally,
Please return favor to poets who are here yet you did not reach them initially,
Bless your day.
Have fun!
May 12, 2011 at 12:25 pm
“sunlit darkness”…i love the combination…you have a way with words….beautiful poem 🙂
May 12, 2011 at 9:47 pm
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Short but very descriptive…love the imagery of the poem.
May 22, 2011 at 4:40 pm
‘ Moon fettered with sun’s luminosity’…beautifully written!
July 11, 2011 at 6:02 am
Wonderful imagery here both in the poem and in the photo. Excellent execution …
Poem on … Happy Potluck!
July 13, 2011 at 2:50 pm
Great balance between dark and light. It was short and perfect.
July 13, 2011 at 4:18 pm
Hi Vishwas
That was really great.. I liked it a lot.
Thanks for joining in the poetry potluck this week, which I hosted for the first time this week….
Shashi
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July 13, 2011 at 5:06 pm
Nice and Deep Poem..!
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July 14, 2011 at 10:53 pm